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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of land use for three different purposes (for pasture, arable and non-agriculture) in Portugal, New Zealand, Canada, and Norway.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of land use for three different purposes (for pasture, arable and non-agriculture) in Portugal, New Zealand, Canada, and Norway. PRL6K
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of land use for three different purposes (for pasture, arable and non-agriculture) in Portugal, New Zealand, Canada, and Norway. Generally, non - agricultural land accounts for the majority of the pie charts in both four countries. While pasture is the second common purpose for land in New Zealand, it is not popular in other countries. Canada and Norway seem to have the same pattern though there are still some little differences between them. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that non - agricultural land accounts for most proportion in Canada and Norway, making up at around 95%, compared to the figure in two other countries, the rate is pretty high in Portugal and merely equal to the pasture land in New Zealand. In contrast, the second common land purpose in New Zealand becomes the less in others, just reaching under 10% and even accounting for 1% in Norway. Meanwhile, in terms of arable land, it makes a significant gap between Portugal and other countries as representing about one-third of the chart and just under 5% in others.
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate the proportion of land use for three different purposes (for pasture, arable and non-agriculture) in Portugal, New Zealand, Canada, and Norway.

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