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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of energy production during the period from 1995 to 2005

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of energy production during the period from 1995 to 2005 7P07b

IT IS CLEARED THAT there was a decline in the Gas Petrol, Nuclear power and others, whereas the figure for Gas and Coal witnessed an upward trend over the period shown. In addition, Coal was the highest resource produce during the period. AS CAN BE SEEN FROM THE CHART, In 1995, Coal was the lead in terms of the number of resources energy produced, which was accounted for 29, 8%, followed by Gas with slightly under (29, 53%). In the Following five—year of the period, Gas production started its rising significantly trajectory to 30, 31%. Subsequently, this trend can be seen in the manufutre of produce coal, which increased to 30, 93% in the last term. With regards to the data of these energies, the proportion of petrol, nuclear power was 29, 27% and 6, 4% and the remaining energy sources account for 4, 9% in 1995. around one-tenth was the proportion of the other energy in 2005. In a similar period, Nuclear production, which it experienced moderately increased over 10% at this level towards the end of the period. By contrast, the dramatic decline from 29, 27% to 19, 55% in the next five years can be seen in Petrol power

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