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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of purposes for people in Great Britain visiting art museums in 1990 and 2000.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of purposes for people in Great Britain visiting art museums in 1990 and 2000. 8dGwV

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of purposes for people in Great Britain visiting art museums in 1990 and 2000. Generally, it is clear that most of the people who visited art museums were for learning and this figure did not change too much over time. Meanwhile, the number of people who went there for buying art, spending time with relatives and attending a special exhibition had some slight shifts to rise. In contrast, filling travel schedules was the only reason that shrank in 2000. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that gaining knowledge from art museums accounted for almost half of the graph, making up 45% in 2000 compared to buying art, not so many people went there to do so, just representing 1% in the first year before surpassing other reasons to be the fifth common explanation for the guest to go there. As for attending a special exhibition and spending time with family or friends, both seemed to have the same figure in 1990 (12%), after 10 years, they had a slight change to reach 18% and 17% relatively. In terms of filling travel schedules, this proportion surged sharply over time, decreasing by a double, reaching 12% in total. Although this reason had a significant drop, the others were the less common explanation for people to get to art museums, while it merely remained stable over 10 years.

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