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southwest airport now and nextyear

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The given map illustrates present southwest airport and resigned airport in next year. Over all, from the given map it can be depicted there will be numerous modern technology with advanced facilities will apply. Lets discuss in detail, Firstly a number of gates improved from 8 to 18 in counts and the structure was in Y shape. Moreover in between these gates a sky train route introduced to make it more comfortable. There will be no change in security passport control and passport control customs, but a small modification is a small shop going to come and then departure and arrival side has no notable change but a car hire will be placed nearby arrival section. Whereas, it can be observed from the current map inside of the departure has only check in and cafe but later on bag drop section also will be included. when it comes to arrival section at present nothing but in next year an atm, cafe also included. In conclusion, Next year a southwest airport will have multiple facilities with advanced modern technology.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map illustrates present southwest airport and resigned airport in next
 year. Over all, from the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map it can be depicted
 there will be numerous modern technology with advanced facilities will apply.

Did you mean "Let's" (let's = let us; lets = 3rd person singular of 'let')?Let's
Lets
 discuss in detail, Firstly
 a number of gates This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 from 8 to 18 in counts and the structure was in Y shape. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 in between these gates a sky train route introduced to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it more comfortable.

There will be no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in security passport control and passport control customs, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 modification is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 shop going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and then departure and arrival side has no notable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a car hire will be placed
 nearby arrival section. Whereas, it can be observed
 from the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 map This phrase is redundant. Consider using "inside".inside
inside of
 the departure has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 in and 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 later on bag drop section also
 will be included
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to arrival section at present nothing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in next
 year an Possible spelling mistake found.ATMatamarmatomate
atm
, 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
also
 included.

In conclusion
, Next
 year a southwest airport will have multiple facilities with advanced modern technology. 