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the graph shows the twitter use by different age groups in USA from November 2020 to May 2013

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The line graph illustrates the twitter users by four different age groups in America from November 2010 to May 2013. Overall, the usage of twitter in each group has risen sharply, while the age group from 18 to 29 hit a peak in 2013 with 30% (three in ten) of the users. The percentage of twitter users from 18 to 29 jumped more than twofold from around 15% (in 2010) to 30% (in 2013) respectively. On the other hand, the over 65 years group is less than 5% in the starting period and slightly went up to 10% (one in ten) in 2013 which finished in the lowest point. There was a fluctuation trend in the first two years for the 30 to 49. After that, it increased minimally from about 12% (2011) to 17% (2013). In 2010, the 50 to 64 remained flat until next year, there was a tiny rise in this group from around 8% (2011) to 12% (2013). A similar pattern was observed in between these two groups by 30 to 49 is approximately 5% higher than 50 to 64 in the finished period.
The line graph illustrates the twitter users by four
different
age
groups
in America from November 2010 to May 2013.

Overall
, the usage of twitter in each
group
has risen
sharply
, while the age
group
from 18 to 29 hit a peak in 2013 with 30% (three in ten) of the users. The percentage of twitter users from 18 to 29 jumped more than twofold from around 15% (in 2010) to 30% (in 2013)
respectively
.
On the other hand
, the over 65 years
group
is less than 5% in the starting period and
slightly
went up to 10% (one in ten) in 2013 which finished in the lowest point. There was a fluctuation trend in the
first
two years for the 30 to 49. After that, it increased
minimally
from about 12% (2011) to 17% (2013). In 2010, the 50 to 64 remained flat until
next
year, there was a tiny rise in this
group
from around 8% (2011) to 12% (2013).

A similar pattern
was observed
in between these two
groups
by 30 to 49 is approximately 5% higher than 50 to 64 in the finished period.
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