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The line graph show the information about females in parliament in Germany, Italy and france

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The line gooph illustrates the information about femeile members of pooliorrent in five different Europem countries somedy Germany Italy, Forneo, Belgium. The data is presented too percentage Overall, it is evident that all countries female member of poorliament increased posind. Apoot from this, Italy pooled highest among all countries, I To with in 20010 uk had about solo of female members in parliament ahereal under 20% od formale members accounted by Belgium. Moooover Italy and France had almost similar formale members at paroliomont nearly 26% and as 1. respectively In this years Cormany had highest format momber of parliament, which around 334 Furthermore, after four years countries's formale membess of Parliament site minimally. In 2008, there diamatic increment UK's members and reached at 2001. However, other countries such as Czermany Itoly, framed and Belgium are slightly increpe by about In the last year, Italy peaked highest and reported almost 39. 4. ad fomale members at parliament achprone, Commany and Foornice Cose dose to nearly 36. 1. and
The line
gooph
illustrates the information

about
femeile
members of
pooliorrent
in five

different
Europem
countries
somedy
Germany

Italy,
Forneo
, Belgium. The data
is presented


too percentage

Overall
, it is evident that all countries female

member of
poorliament
increased

posind
.
Apoot
from this, Italy pooled highest

among

all countries,

I To

with in 20010

uk
had

about solo of female members in parliament

ahereal
under 20%
od
formale
members

accounted

by Belgium.
Moooover
Italy and

France had almost similar
formale
members

at
paroliomont


nearly
26%

and as 1.
respectively


In
this years
Cormany
had
highest
format

momber
of parliament, which around 334

Furthermore
, after four years
countries's


formale
membess
of Parliament

site

minimally
. In 2008, there
diamatic


increment

UK's members and reached at

2001.
However
, other countries

such as
Czermany


Itoly
, framed and Belgium are
slightly


increpe


by

about

In the last year, Italy

peaked highest

and reported almost 39. 4. ad
fomale
members

at parliament
achprone
,
Commany
and
Foornice


Cose
dose to
nearly
36. 1.

and
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