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The pie charts illustrate the amount (in the proportion) of substances including sodium, saturated fats and added sugars used/eaten in American people’s meals.

The pie charts illustrate the amount (in the proportion) of substances including sodium, saturated fats and added sugars used/eaten in American people’s meals. LKDG
The pie charts illustrate the amount (in the proportion) of substances including sodium, saturated fats and added sugars used/eaten in American people’s meals. Overall, sodium is the relatively popular ingredient that is consumed in all of the meals. Especially, there is a visible preference in consuming three surveyed substances for dinners. Out of the four meals, breakfasts in the USA consume the lowest amount of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars with 14%, 16%, and 16% respectively. Meanwhile, the figures for lunch are higher than those for breakfast, they account for 29%, 26%, and 19% respectively. In comparison with breakfast and lunch, there are a significant amount of sodium and saturated fats consumed for dinner 43% and over a third respectively. However, the figures for snacks make up at a lower rate, 14%, and 21%. Finally, nearly half of the quantity of added sugar used for snacks and the equivalent ratio for dinner is 23%. (155 words).
The pie charts illustrate the amount (in the proportion) of substances including sodium, saturated fats and
added
sugars
used
/eaten in American
people
’s meals.

Overall
, sodium is the
relatively
popular ingredient that
is consumed
in
all of the
meals.
Especially
, there is a visible preference in consuming three surveyed substances for dinners.

Out of the four meals, breakfasts in the USA consume the lowest amount of sodium, saturated fats and
added
sugars with 14%, 16%, and 16%
respectively
. Meanwhile, the figures for lunch are higher than those for breakfast, they account for 29%, 26%, and 19%
respectively
.
In comparison
with breakfast and lunch, there are a significant
amount
of sodium and saturated fats consumed for dinner 43% and over a third
respectively
.

However
, the figures for snacks
make
up at a lower rate, 14%, and 21%.
Finally
,
nearly
half of the quantity of
added
sugar
used
for snacks and the equivalent ratio for dinner is 23%. (155 words).
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate the amount (in the proportion) of substances including sodium, saturated fats and added sugars used/eaten in American people’s meals.

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