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The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010

The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010 GE1o
The graphs illustrates the percentage of people who owned a computer based off population between the year of 2002 and 2010 as well as based off education for the year 2002 and 2010. As shown by the graphs, the percentage of population who possess a computer remains in a stable rise all throughout the years whereas the data based off education level has a significant difference between the years. In more detail, the population that owns a computer in 2002 is around 40 to 60 percent and followed by the year 2004 with 60 percent, 2006 with around 60 to 80 percent, and lastly the year 2010 with almost 80 percent of the population. Ownership of computer based off education level shows a high difference with students without high school diploma with 15 percent in 2002 going up to 40 percent in 2010, high school graduates with 35 percent in 2002 rising tp 65 percent in 2010, in complete college students with 50 percent in 2002 then fluctuates to 80 percent in 2010, etc.
The graphs
illustrates
the percentage of
people
who
owned
a computer based
off
population between the
year
of 2002 and 2010
as well
as based
off
education for the
year
2002 and 2010.

As shown by the graphs, the percentage of population who possess a computer remains in a stable rise all throughout the years whereas the data based
off
education level has a significant difference between the years.

In more detail, the population that
owns
a computer in 2002 is around 40 to 60
percent
and followed by the
year
2004 with 60
percent
, 2006 with around 60 to 80
percent
, and
lastly
the
year
2010 with almost 80
percent
of the population.

Ownership of computer based
off
education level
shows
a high difference with students without high school diploma with 15
percent
in 2002 going up to 40
percent
in 2010, high school graduates with 35
percent
in 2002 rising
tp
65
percent
in 2010, in complete college students with 50
percent
in 2002 then fluctuates to 80
percent
in 2010, etc.
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IELTS academic The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010

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