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a bar chart which shows the amount of time that men and women spend in household task

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This report derives from a bar chart which illustrates the total time men and women spend performing six different chores around the house during the day. Overall, the males prefer gardening over any other task and dislike performing clothes washing more than any other task. Not only is this point clear, but also women utilize the most time for cooking, while maintenance is a job they spend the least amount of time acting on. Notably, women more than double the men in cooking with a 44 minute difference between the sexes. Additionally, observe how women execute the cleaning for about 45 minutes more than the men. Next with gardening, the men perform this for 49. 5 minutes, and the women conduct this activity for less than half that time. With the care of children, women far exceed the men in this area by 25 minutes each day. Besides this point, the men undertake maintenance almost three times more than women. On a final note of comparison, the females spend 25 minutes per day washing clothes, while men only use 2 minutes of their time on this duty.
This report derives from a bar chart which illustrates the total
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men


and
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spend performing six
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chores around the
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during the day.

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, the males prefer gardening over any other task and dislike

performing clothes washing more than any other task. Not
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is this

point
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,
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also
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women
utilize the most
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for cooking, while

maintenance is a job they spend the least amount of
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time
acting on.

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,
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women
more than double the
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men
in cooking with a
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44 minute


difference between the sexes.
Additionally
, observe how women

execute the cleaning for about 45 minutes more than the
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men
.
Next


with gardening, the
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men
perform this for 49. 5 minutes, and the women

conduct this activity for less than half that time.

With the care of children,
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women
far exceed the
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men
in this area by 25

minutes each day.
Besides
this point, the
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undertake maintenance

almost three
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times
more than
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women
. On a final note of comparison,

the females spend 25 minutes per day washing clothes, while
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men
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2 minutes of their
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time
on this duty.
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IELTS academic a bar chart which shows the amount of time that men and women spend in household task

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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