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The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the martial status of adult Americans in two years

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the martial status of adult Americans in two years d6WX
From the given set of charts, First one represents the amount of marriages and divorces occurred in the USA during 30 years whereas the other one compares the marital status of American adults in two years. Overall, The number of marriages in America were significantly higher than the breakups while the majority of American adults prefer the marriage. In 1970, 2. 5 million marriages were happened in America and the number surprisingly remains the same after 10 years. The number of marriage slipped dramatically in the following years and reaches at 1 million in the year 2000. The year 1970 witnessed a million American divorcee which climbed to 1. 5 million in 1980. Suddenly, The number of breakups fells down in the year 1990(1. 1 million) which was pretty much same after the decade(1 million). Turning to the second graph, 70% of adults agreed to the wedding in the year 1970 which then drastically decreased to 10% after the 30 years. While, More than 10% of adults were in favor of being single. The minority of adults were Widowed and divorced which was almost 8% in both years.
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marriages
and divorces occurred in the USA during 30 years whereas the other one compares the marital status of American
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adults
in two years.
Overall
, The
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number
of
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marriages
in America were
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higher than the breakups while the majority of American
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adults
prefer the marriage.

In 1970, 2. 5
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million
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marriages
were happened
in America and the
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number
surprisingly
remains the same after 10 years. The
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number
of
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marriage
slipped
dramatically
in the following years and reaches at 1
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million
in the
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year
2000.

The
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year
1970 witnessed a
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million
American divorcee which climbed to 1. 5
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million
in 1980.
Suddenly
, The
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number
of breakups fells down in the
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year
1990(1. 1
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million)
which was pretty much same after the decade(1 million).

Turning to the second graph, 70% of
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adults
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agreed
to the wedding in the
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year
1970 which then
drastically
decreased to 10% after the 30 years.
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, More than 10% of
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adults
were in favor of being single. The minority of
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adults
were Widowed
and divorced which was almost 8% in both years.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the martial status of adult Americans in two years

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