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The pie charts illustrate that the service of library reacted by full time and part time job, survey conducted by university library.

The pie charts illustrate that the service of library reacted by full time and part time job, survey conducted by university library. jbQO1
The pie charts illustrate that the service of library reacted by full time and part time job, survey conducted by university library. Overall, it can be seen that full time job students are very happy of current opening hours as well as IT support offered, whereas part time students very happy and not support respectively. In details, Because of IT support, more than half proportion student on full time job are very happy, and more than 30% and 15% student are quite happy and not support respectively, 87% full time students are delighted in favour of opening hour, whereas only 1% of student disagree with it, and 12% student moderatly happy. Furthermore, almost half of part time students were very happy owining to IT support offered, it accounted for 45%. however, 35% and one fifth students quite happy and totely disagree with it. In addition, almost two third part time student were very happy due to IT support, nearly quarter of part time students setisfied with it, nevertheless, Very least proportion of students were not agree with currently opening hours.
The pie charts illustrate that the service of library reacted by
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate that the service of library reacted by full time and part time job, survey conducted by university library.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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