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The pie charts illustrate number of British students ,who were studying at a university of England and who were speaking different languages apart from English in the year 2000 and 2010.The data has been calibrated in percentage.

The pie charts illustrate number of British students, who were studying at a university of England and who were speaking different languages apart from English in the year 2000 and 2010. The data has been calibrated in percentage. YyVnN
The pie charts illustrate number of British students, who were studying at a university of England and who were speaking different languages apart from English in the year 2000 and 2010. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, most of the British students were not speaking any other languages at the university from the year 2000 to 2010. Although, in the year 2000 Spanish was speaking by most of the students while, German found least spoken language in that year. On the other hand, in the year 2010 mostly students were speaking another language. Spanish and German only spoken student was one of the lowest one over there. It is quite clear from the first pie chart, the percentage of students who were not speaking any other language(30%) found the highest one followed by students who know Spanish(20%), French only(15%), knowledge of another language(15%) and 10% of each students were speaking of German and other two languages respectively in the year 2000. Besides that, in the year 2010 percentage of the students who were not speaking any other languages increased by 5% to reach 35% and 20% of British students found speaking another language. 15 % of students were speaking two other languages(15%), Spanish only(10%), French only(10%) and German only (10%).
The pie charts illustrate number of British
students
,
who
were studying at a university of England and
who
were speaking
different
languages
apart from English in the
year
2000 and 2010. The data has
been calibrated
in percentage.

Overall
, most of the British
students
were not speaking any
other
languages
at the university from the
year
2000 to 2010. Although, in the
year
2000 Spanish was speaking by most of the
students
while, German found least spoken
language
in that
year
. On the
other
hand, in the
year
2010
mostly
students
were speaking another
language
. Spanish and German
only
spoken
student
was one of the lowest one over there.

It is quite
clear
from the
first
pie chart, the percentage of
students
who
were not speaking any
other
language(30%)
found the highest one followed by
students
who
know Spanish(20%), French
only(15%)
, knowledge of another
language(15%)
and 10% of each
students
were speaking of German and
other
two
languages
respectively
in the
year
2000.

Besides
that, in the
year
2010 percentage of the
students
who
were not speaking any
other
languages
increased by 5% to reach 35% and 20% of British
students
found speaking another
language
. 15 % of
students
were speaking two
other
languages(15%)
, Spanish
only(10%)
, French
only(10%)
and German
only
(10%).
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate number of British students, who were studying at a university of England and who were speaking different languages apart from English in the year 2000 and 2010. The data has been calibrated in percentage.

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