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Sodium, fat and sugar consume by Americans during meal

Sodium, fat and sugar consume by Americans during meal PMa7B
The provided pie charts compare how the average proportions in general meals of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar (3 types) of nutrients, all of which may be unsanitary if eaten too much. Overall, what stands out of the charts is that, whereas sodium and saturated fat both are mostly consumed in dinner, Americans consumed the largest amount of added sugar during snacks. Looking at the charts, it can be clearly seen that the figure for dinner of sodium is 43%, which is significantly higher than the two figures of saturated fat and added sugar, at 37% and 23%. The figure for lunch of saturated fat is 26%, which is lower than the figure of sodium, at 29%; however, higher than the figure of added sugar is 19%. On the other hand, the figure for snack of added sugar is 42%, which is larger than the two figures of sodium and saturated fat, at 14% and 21% respectively. The figures for breakfast of added sugar and saturated fat are 16%, where the figure for breakfast of sodium is 14%, a difference of 2%.
The provided pie charts compare how the average proportions
in general
meals of sodium,
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saturated
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, and
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added
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sugar
(3 types) of nutrients, all of which may be unsanitary if eaten too much.

Overall
, what stands out of the charts is that, whereas sodium and
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saturated
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fat
both are
mostly
consumed in dinner, Americans consumed the largest amount of
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added
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sugar
during snacks.

Looking at the charts, it can be
clearly
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that the
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for dinner of sodium is 43%, which is
significantly
higher than the two
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figures
of
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saturated
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fat
and
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added
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sugar
, at 37% and 23%. The
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figure
for lunch of
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saturated
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fat
is 26%, which is lower than the
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of sodium, at 29%;
however
, higher than the
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figure
of
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added
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sugar
is 19%.

On the other hand
, the
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figure
for snack of
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added
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sugar
is 42%, which is larger than the two
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figures
of sodium and
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saturated
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fat
, at 14% and 21%
respectively
. The
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for breakfast of
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and
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are 16%, where the
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for breakfast of sodium is 14%, a difference of 2%.
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IELTS academic Sodium, fat and sugar consume by Americans during meal

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