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The two tables explain about the Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas sold in five European countries in 1999 and 2004.

The two tables explain about the Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas sold in five European countries in 1999 and 2004. ndk6R
The two tables explain about the Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas sold in five European countries in 1999 and 2004. In 1999, Denmark earned the biggest sales of coffee, which counted for 1. 8 millions of euros. While the smallest number came from Sweden, that was estimated for 800 thousands. The amount of coffee sold in each country was increased in 2004. However, the highest number was contributed by UK, and it was significantly rised from 1. 5 to 20 millions. Similarly, the lowest portion still from the Sweden. On the other hand, the sales of bananas really shown a great proportion in 1999, especially in Switzerland. It was approximately worth 15 millions of euros. Meanwhile, the smallest portion came from Belgium that counted for 600 thousands. The sales was increased in 2004 except for Denmark that had a slight drop from 2 to 0. 9 millions. The selling was extremely growed in Switzerland, and it was tripled to 47 millions.
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Fairtrade-labelled
coffee and bananas sold in five European countries in 1999 and 2004.

In 1999, Denmark earned the biggest sales of coffee, which counted for 1. 8
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millions
of euros. While the smallest number came from Sweden, that
was estimated
for 800 thousands. The amount of coffee sold in each country
was increased
in 2004.
However
, the highest number
was contributed
by UK, and it was
significantly
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rised
from 1. 5 to 20
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millions
.
Similarly
, the lowest portion
still
from the Sweden.

On the other hand
, the sales of bananas
really
shown a great proportion in 1999,
especially
in Switzerland. It was approximately worth 15
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millions
of euros. Meanwhile, the smallest portion came from Belgium that counted for 600 thousands. The sales
was increased
in 2004
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except for
Denmark that had a slight drop from 2 to 0. 9
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millions
. The selling was
extremely
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growed
in Switzerland, and it
was tripled
to 47
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millions
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IELTS academic The two tables explain about the Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas sold in five European countries in 1999 and 2004.

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