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The pie charts illustrate how different sources produced energy in France in the years 1995 and 2005.

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The pie charts illustrate how different sources produced energy in France in the years 1995 and 2005. Overall, the figures of both the beginning and the ending of the period were similar. Gas was the largest segment for energy production, whereas, other essentials produced the lowest energy. The main sources of the energy production, comprised more than half of the whole figured, were gas and coal. They had a slight growth from 29. 63% and 29. 80% in 1995 to 30. 31% and 30. 93% respectively. Petrol was significantly decreased using to generate the energy approximately 10% after 10-year period. On the contrary, the use of nuclear and other sources had remarkably increased. The figure of nuclear rose to 10. 10% at the end of the period. Although other were the smallest parts, they were grown up from 4. 90% in 1995 to 9. 10% in 2005.
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in France in the years 1995 and 2005.

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, the figures of both the beginning and the ending of the period were similar. Gas was the largest segment for
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production, whereas, other essentials produced the lowest energy.

The main sources of the
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energy
production, comprised more than half of the whole figured,
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gas and coal. They had a slight growth from 29. 63% and 29. 80% in 1995 to 30. 31% and 30. 93%
respectively
.

Petrol was
significantly
decreased using to generate the
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approximately 10% after 10-year period.
On the contrary
, the
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use
of nuclear and other sources had
remarkably
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end
of the period. Although other were the smallest parts, they
were grown
up from 4. 90% in 1995 to 9. 10% in 2005.
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate how different sources produced energy in France in the years 1995 and 2005.

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