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The diagrams illustrate the current ground floor blueprint of a house and a proposed outline for some building design.

The diagrams illustrate the current ground floor blueprint of a house and a proposed outline for some building design. JKY7D
The diagrams illustrate the current ground floor blueprint of a house and a proposed outline for some building design. Overall, the proposed construction outlines significant changes in the structure of the living room. The kitchen area is expected to be more compact as compared to the current layout. Although the entry points remain the same, the internal doors have been made adjacent to each other. The stairs are designed to relocate towards the center, which alters the location of the two internal doors. The internal doors have been moved towards the left of the entrance door that passes through the living room. Instead of the two internal walls lying on either side of the stairs, the internal wall in the living room has been eradicated, which also takes away the hall space. As per the proposed construction, the staircase directly opens in the living room. The kitchen will have additional space for kitchen furniture. As per the proposed blueprint, the internal doors grant access to the kitchen area and living room as they lie in between the two areas.
The diagrams illustrate the
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blueprint of a
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house
and a
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outline for
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some
building design.

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, the
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proposed
construction outlines significant
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changes
in the structure of the
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living
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room
. The
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kitchen
area is
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expected
to be more compact as compared to the
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current
layout. Although the entry points remain the same, the
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internal
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doors
have
been made
adjacent to each other.

The stairs
are designed
to relocate towards the center, which alters the location of the two
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internal
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doors
. The
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internal
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doors
have been
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moved
towards the
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left
of the entrance
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door
that passes through the
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living
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room
.
Instead
of the two
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internal
walls lying on either side of the stairs, the
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internal
wall in the
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living
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room
has
been eradicated
, which
also
takes away the hall space. As per the
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proposed
construction, the staircase
directly
opens in the
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living
room.

The
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kitchen
will have additional space for
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kitchen
furniture. As per the
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proposed
blueprint, the
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internal
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doors
grant access to the
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kitchen
area and
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living
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room
as they lie in between the two areas.
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IELTS academic The diagrams illustrate the current ground floor blueprint of a house and a proposed outline for some building design.

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6.5
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