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the chart shows how the various age group people spent money on fastfoo din 2010

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The given bar graph presents the number of people from different age group who spent money on fast-food in 2010. The given data depicted in percentage. According to the graph that interest of all groups of people in fastfood was quite different. It is clear from the chart that pizza and burger are the most prefered by the youngsters as they spent 65% and 50% money on them respectively which is nearly twice as burger was consumed 40% and pizza was consumed 25% by middle age group. While only 10% elders were interested in pizza and burger. There was a marked variation in 70% people of age group 60-79 liked sandwich which was highest among all the age group and it was also similar to age group 40-59 as 65% people were at middle age prefered dosa. All in all, we may say that youngsters were not interested in sandwich and dosa as they have totally different choice than people who are from age group 40-79.
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-food in 2010. The
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data depicted in percentage.

According to the graph that interest of all
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from the chart that pizza and burger are the most
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prefered
by the youngsters as they spent 65% and 50% money on them
respectively
which is
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twice as burger
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40% and pizza
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25% by middle
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. While
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only
10% elders
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in pizza and burger.

There was a marked variation in 70%
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60-79 liked sandwich which was highest among all the
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age
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and it was
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similar to
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40-59 as 65%
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prefered
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dosa
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40-79.

IELTS academic the chart shows how the various age group people spent money on fastfoo din 2010

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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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