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The pie charts illustrate consumption of water used for three areas in the six parts of the world.The data has been calibrated in percentage.These areas are majorly industrial use, agricultural use and domestic use

The pie charts illustrate consumption of water used for three areas in the six parts of the world. The data has been calibrated in percentage. These areas are majorly industrial use, agricultural use and domestic use LGyg1
The pie charts illustrate consumption of water used for three areas in the six parts of the world. The data has been calibrated in percentage. These areas are majorly industrial use, agricultural use and domestic use. Overall, the percentage of water used in agriculture in central Asia was one of the highest one and in Europe it got the least one, while Europe was one of the biggest place where water was used for industrial purpose. Central Asia was the least one in this use. On the other hand, in domestic use South America has been found the top most, while central Asia and south east Asia received the lowest one rank of water consumption. It is quite clear from the Pie charts, in industrial use water was consumed to 53% in Europe, which was the maximum one followed by south east Asia, south America and north America to 12%, 10% and 8% respectively. On the other hand, Africa and central Asia were the least one in this area to 7% and 5% only. However, in agricultural use central Asia was the first one place of using water to 88%, while south Asia, Africa, south America and north America were been found between 81% to 39%. In Europe, water was used by 32% in agriculture. Besides that, domestic use was found maximum one in south America by 19% and it was contributed equally by 7% only in central Asia and south east Asia, which was the lowest one in usage of water.
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for three areas in the six parts of the world. The data has
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, agricultural
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and domestic
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central Asia
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, in domestic
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consumption.

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from the Pie charts, in industrial
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was consumed
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to 12%, 10% and 8%
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central Asia
were the least one in this area to 7% and 5%
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to 88%, while
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south Asia
, Africa,
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south America
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north America
were been
found between 81% to 39%. In Europe,
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by 32% in agriculture.

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by 19% and it
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate consumption of water used for three areas in the six parts of the world. The data has been calibrated in percentage. These areas are majorly industrial use, agricultural use and domestic use

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