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Nature,the environment and energy

Nature,the environment and energy WE23k
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contamination is a serious form of pollution and that can be challenging
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to rectify
. There seem to be two
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main
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couses
involved, and a variety of damaging effect to n
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people
and the biosphere, which we will discuss here.
Provably
the
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main
factor is the issue of emissions from car, factories and other
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human
activities. These emissions contain damaging pollutant particles which can contamination rainwater runoff and
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the enter
the
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water
cycle, by transforming through the
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water
table into aquifers, streams and rivers. Filtration and processing are not
really
viable option for such large volume of
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water
. Major
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couses
of pollution
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water
is industries wastage
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water
, these are
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removely
that
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water
throughout to the pipe on river or sea. And other
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main
of
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water
pollution is
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human
life, we are damaging our
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rever
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water
.
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Human
go out urine and
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letrine
at riverbank and
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laks
. Affect Of
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this
causes on
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human
health and
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human
life is
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very
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dangerous
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fo
better future. Marine species are time to time deleting from to the sea.
Overall
, we
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see
that emissions and dumping are
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main
origins of the problem, and that the effect on both
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human
and animal
are exacerbated
by the existing environmental, criminal or social problem.
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IELTS academic Nature,the environment and energy

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
204 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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