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The given chart provides information about the number of achieved Olympic medals in 12 countries.

The given chart provides information about the number of achieved Olympic medals in 12 countries. XDNLO
The given chart shows the information about the total quantity of Olympic medals achieved in twelve participating countries. It is crystal clear that the highest number of medals which have been achieved belongs to the USA. In addition, the ratio of gold, silver, and bronze of each nation is similar to the other 11 countries. To begin with, the USA ranks the first in total number of medals at nearly 2300, with 950 gold, 650 silver, and 600 bronze medals, which is douple higherthan Soviet, at correctly 1000 medals. Moreover, the UK and France are similar in the number of medals, with nearly 600 and 700 medals, respectively. In addition, other nations only have lower than 500 medals in total. For example, Germany and Italy have about 500 medals including gold, silver, and bronze in particular. Sweden Hungary, Australia East Germany, Japan and China were ranging from 400 to 480 medals in total.
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shows
the information about the
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total
quantity of Olympic
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medals
achieved in twelve participating countries.

It is crystal
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clear
that the highest number of
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which have
been achieved
belongs to the USA.
In addition
, the ratio of gold, silver, and bronze of each nation is similar to the other 11 countries.

To
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begin
with, the USA ranks the
first
in
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total
number of
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medals
at
nearly
2300, with 950 gold, 650 silver, and 600 bronze
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medals
, which is
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douple
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higherthan
Soviet, at
correctly
1000
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medals
.
Moreover
, the UK and France are similar in the number of
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medals
, with
nearly
600 and 700
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medals
,
respectively
.

In addition
, other nations
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only
have lower than 500
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medals
in
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total
.
For example
, Germany and Italy have about 500
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medals
including gold, silver, and bronze
in particular
. Sweden Hungary, Australia East Germany, Japan and China were ranging from 400 to 480
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medals
in
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total
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IELTS academic The given chart provides information about the number of achieved Olympic medals in 12 countries.

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