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The pie charts illustrate a UK school’s annual spending and compare the changes over two decades

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The pie charts illustrate a UK school’s annual spending and compare the changes over two decades Overall, it can be seen that the school spent the most percentage of money on teachers’ salaries, meanwhile, it is opposite for insurance which was the lowest proportion. In 1981, there was 40% in the percentage of money spent on teacher’s salaries, while the figure for insurance was just about 2%. In the next 20 years, the proportion spent on teachers’ salaries and insurance increased slightly, at 45% and 8% respectively. In terms of other workers; salaries, expenditure on this decreased significantly over two decades, with 28% in, 22% and 15% in 1981, 1991 and 2001 respectively. In addition, the percentage spent on resources eg books also fell after increasing to 20% in 1991 and then fell significantly to 9% in 2001. Investment on furniture and equipment saw a sharp decline from 15% in 1981 to 5% in 1991, before rising dramatically to 23% in 2001.

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, meanwhile, it is opposite for insurance which was the lowest proportion.

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spent
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salaries
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spent
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, at 45% and 8% respectively
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, expenditure on this decreased significantly
 over two decades, with 28% in, 22% and 15% in 1981, 1991 and 2001 respectively
.

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