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The chart presents information about the value from goods that was exported by one country’s during 2015 and 2016.

The chart presents information about the value from goods that was exported by one country’s during 2015 and 2016. 26oBJ
The bar chart presents information about the number of money was earned from five kinds of goods that was exported by one country’s during 2015 and 2016. Generally, petroleum and engineered goods are the highest income that was earned during those periods whereas agricultural and textiles products were the less income that one country’s received it. Following this data, in 2015, there are two goods as accounted the most highly income products such as petroleum and engineered products. Petroleum reached the highest amount by 60 billions dollars. While engineered goods accounted approximately 55 billions. The rest of products was accounted less than 50 billions dollars namely gems and jewellery, agricultural, and textiles products accounted approximately 41 billions, 31 billions, and 25 billions of dollars respectively. In 2016 has similar trend with the last years. However, there was a slight difference of amount. Same as in 2015, petroleum goods was still in the first rank, it was increased by 3%. While engineered goods climbed by 8. 5% was reached almost the same amount with petroleum in 62 billions. Gems and jewellery were slightly decreased by 5. 18% and agricultural showed a tiny growth just only 0. 81%. In the contrary, textile growth significantly by 15. 24%.
The bar chart presents information about the number of money
was earned
from five kinds of
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goods
that
was exported
by one country’s during 2015 and 2016.

Generally
,
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petroleum
and
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engineered
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goods
are the highest income that
was earned
during those periods whereas agricultural and textiles
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products
were the less income that one country’s received it.

Following this data, in 2015, there are two
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goods
as
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accounted
the most
highly
income
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products
such as
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petroleum
and
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engineered
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products
.
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Petroleum
reached the highest amount by 60
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billions
dollars.
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While
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engineered
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goods
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accounted
approximately 55
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billions
. The rest of
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products
was
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accounted
less than 50
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billions
dollars
namely
gems and
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jewellery
, agricultural, and textiles
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products
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accounted
approximately 41
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billions
, 31
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billions
, and 25
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billions
of dollars
respectively
.

In 2016 has similar trend with the last years.
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, there was a slight difference of amount. Same as in 2015,
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petroleum
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goods
was
still
in the
first
rank, it
was increased
by 3%.
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While
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engineered
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goods
climbed by 8. 5%
was reached
almost the same amount with
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petroleum
in 62
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billions
. Gems and
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jewellery
were
slightly
decreased by 5. 18% and agricultural
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showed
a tiny growth
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just
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only
0. 81%. In the contrary, textile growth
significantly
by 15. 24%.
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