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The bar chart illustrates the state of accommodation among two groups of residents of UK between the age of 25 to 34, namely home owners and renters.

The bar chart illustrates the state of accommodation among two groups of residents of UK between the age of 25 to 34, namely home owners and renters. JK2eE
The bar chart illustrates the state of accommodation among two groups of residents of UK between the age of 25 to 34, namely home owners and renters. In brief, it can be seen that there are substantial changes in both, however an opposite trend is also registered. In 2004, lodges accounted for 20% of the people, whereas the statistics of landlords exceeded it by reaching at the peak of two thirds. However, the gap between them shortened gradually but remained significant up until 2010. By contrast, the trend of renting was revealed, given the statistics of their and that of house holders fluctuating slightly more and less than 40% over the period of 2011-2012. From time to time, the percentage of house owners fluctuated and took a significant dip, while the dramatic upturn of the other party peaked at near half of the country. Overall, the opponents demonstrated distinctive developments comparing to it was back then.
The bar chart illustrates the state of accommodation among two groups of residents of UK between the age of 25 to 34,
namely
home owners
and renters.
In brief
, it can be
seen
that there are substantial
changes
in both,
however
an opposite trend is
also
registered.

In 2004, lodges accounted for 20% of the
people
, whereas the statistics of landlords exceeded it by reaching at the peak of two thirds.
However
, the gap between them shortened
gradually
but
remained significant up until 2010.

By contrast, the trend of renting
was revealed
,
given
the statistics of their and that of
house
holders fluctuating
slightly
more and less than 40% over the period of 2011-2012. From time to time, the percentage of
house
owners fluctuated and took a significant dip, while the dramatic upturn of the other party peaked at near half of the country.

Overall
, the opponents demonstrated distinctive developments comparing to it was back then.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the state of accommodation among two groups of residents of UK between the age of 25 to 34, namely home owners and renters.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
6.5
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