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The bar chart provide the information about the exports during 2015 and 2016.

The bar chart provide the information about the exports during 2015 and 2016. 8xVPB
The provided bar chart represents the information about the value of one nation's exports in different types from 2015 to 2016. While, the tabular chart illustrates the proportion change in each category of exports in 2016 as compared to 2015. On analysing the bar chart, it becomes lucid that the petroleum products and engineered goods exported in 2015 from 16 billion dollars to 55 billion dollars. In the same year, the proportion of textile earning was just over 25 billion dollars. In 2016, the earning of textile and agricultural products was similar and it's proportion was approximately 30 billion dollars. In the tabular chart, the percentage was change in values whereas the petroleum products increased by 3% during 2015 and 2016. On the other hand there was a 5. 18% decline in the value of gems and jwellary. Moreover, engineer goods and textiles percentage was change and it's proportion was upto 8%. Overall, petroleum had maximum earning and textile had minimum earning. In another case, textile products increased by highest percentage as compared to others
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represents the information about the value of one nation's exports in
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types from 2015 to 2016. While, the tabular
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illustrates the
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proportion
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change
in each category of exports in 2016 as compared to 2015. On
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analysing
the bar
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, it becomes lucid that the petroleum
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products
and engineered
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goods
exported in 2015 from 16
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billion
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dollars
to 55
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billion
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dollars
. In the same year, the
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proportion
of
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textile
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earning
was
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over 25
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billion
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. In 2016, the
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earning
of
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textile
and agricultural
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products
was similar and it's
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was approximately 30
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billion
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In
the tabular
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, the percentage was
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in values whereas the petroleum
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increased by 3% during 2015 and 2016.
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there was a 5. 18% decline in the value of gems and
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jwellary
.
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, engineer
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and
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percentage was
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and it's
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was
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, petroleum had maximum
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and
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textile
had minimum
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earning
. In another case,
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textile
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increased by highest percentage as compared to
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others
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IELTS academic The bar chart provide the information about the exports during 2015 and 2016.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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