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The pictures illustrate the specific changes that have taken place in West Park Secondary School since 1950 to 2010 respectively. overall, Significant changes were taken place between Farmland, sports filed and carpark. Houses were removed from the map. Firstly, Substantial changes were made in farmland. The Farmland in 1950 replaced by SportsFiled and then into Cark park. The Carpark was enlarged. In Additiond, sportsfield was placed between the carpark and playground Moreover, Houses had refigured to car park and Science block in the year 1980. FurtherMore, carpark palce was redesigned. In contrast, Mainroad remain unchanged through out the period. And, for school aera no futher modifactions were made. To sum up, Farmland and Houses were disappeared. Alternatively, new places were bulid. for instance, scienceblock, cark park and sportsfelid were newly constructed.
The pictures illustrate the specific
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changes
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West
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Park
Secondary School since 1950 to 2010
respectively
.

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overall
, Significant
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changes
were taken
place between
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Farmland
, sports filed

and
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carpark
.
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Houses
were removed
from the map.

Firstly
, Substantial
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changes
were made
in
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farmland
. The
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Farmland
in 1950

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replaced
by
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SportsFiled
and then into
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Cark
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park
. The
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Carpark
was enlarged
. In
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Additiond
,
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sportsfield
was placed
between the
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carpark
and
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playground


Moreover
,
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Houses
had
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refigured
to car
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park
and Science block in the year

1980.
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FurtherMore
,
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carpark
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palce
was redesigned
.

In contrast
,
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Mainroad
remain unchanged
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through out
the period. And, for school

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aera
no
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futher
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modifactions
were made
.

To sum up,
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Farmland
and
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Houses
were disappeared
.
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, new places

were
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bulid
.
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for
instance,
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scienceblock
,
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cark
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park
and
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sportsfelid
were

newly
constructed.
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IELTS academic Changes occurred between the places

Academic
  American English
10 paragraphs
131 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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