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The infographic displays the entire procedure of recycling aluminum cans.

The infographic displays the entire procedure of recycling aluminum cans. Qw3aK

The infographic displays the entire procedure of recycling aluminum cans. As is observed, there are basically 7 steps in the given illustration, beginning with the collection and ending with producing new reusable cans. Once used cans are accumulated in bins, recycling trucks will collect and transport them to the recycling center. Here, automatic machines will thoroughly examine and sort aluminum cans into different groups. Those passing the standard will undergo a washing process before being grinded and compressed into blocks. In the following stage, these blocks are melted down under the high temperature of the oven, converting into a fluid constitution. This is molded and shaped into rollings with various thickness ranging from 2. 5mm to 6mm, providing the main material for the can making process. These cans are later customised and filled up with beverages, becoming common products sold in the market.

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cans
. As is observed
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given
 illustration, beginning with the collection and ending with producing new reusable cans.

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used
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cans
are accumulated
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cans
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grinded
 and compressed into blocks.

In the following stage, these blocks are melted
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, providing the main material for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can
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cans
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customised
 and filled up with beverages, becoming common products sold in the market. 