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The pie charts give information about 4 different products (Cotton,Wheat,Vegetable,Fruit)which exported in Uzbekistan between 2012 and 2018.

The pie charts give information about 4 different products (Cotton, Wheat, Vegetable, Fruit)which exported in Uzbekistan between 2012 and 2018. Lr30R
The pie charts give information about 4 different products (Cotton, Wheat, Vegetable, Fruit)which exported in Uzbekistan between 2012 and 2018. Overall, as is observed the most exported product was constituted by cotton in 2012, while the export of wheat comprised of the lowest point in 2018. In terms of Cotton, it experienced a noticeable decrease which accounted for 50% in 2012 and 15% in 2018. Similarly, the percentage of wheat started at 30% at the beginning of the year and fell to one in ten in the final period. In contrast, there was not a big difference in the percentage of fresh fruits and vegetables, which witnessed dramatic rise throughout this period. In fact, fresh fruits showed an increase of 10% in 2012 and 40% in 2018. When it comes to Vegetable, the percentage had increased to 33 percent by 2018.
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products (Cotton, Wheat, Vegetable, Fruit)which exported in Uzbekistan between 2012 and 2018.

Overall
, as
is observed
the most exported product
was constituted
by cotton in 2012, while the export of wheat comprised of the lowest point in 2018.

In terms of Cotton, it experienced a noticeable decrease which accounted for 50% in 2012 and 15% in 2018.
Similarly
, the percentage of wheat
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started
at 30% at the beginning of the year and fell to one in ten in the final period.

In contrast
, there was not a
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big
difference in the percentage of fresh fruits and vegetables, which witnessed dramatic rise throughout this period. In fact, fresh fruits
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showed
an increase of 10% in 2012 and 40% in 2018. When it
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to Vegetable, the percentage had increased to 33 percent by 2018.
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IELTS academic The pie charts give information about 4 different products (Cotton, Wheat, Vegetable, Fruit)which exported in Uzbekistan between 2012 and 2018.

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