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The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant. oR5Q9
The pie chart gives information about the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in different diets. It is noticeable that the proportion of carbohydrates in healthy diet and healthy diet for sport is more than other two parts. By contrast, the percentage of carbohydrates is the same as protein. Except the 40% of protein in average, the proportion of protein is account for the second in the other two diet. Also, whatever in which diet, the proportion of fat is the least. The number of the percentage of fat both in healthy diet and average diet is 20, and it is 15% in healthy diet for sport. In summary, the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat is roughly similar in these three diets.
The pie chart gives information about the
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diet and
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diet for sport is more than other two parts. By contrast, the percentage of
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carbohydrates
is the same as protein.

Except the 40% of protein in average, the
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proportion
of protein is account for the second in the other two
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, whatever in which diet, the
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fat
is the least. The number of the percentage of
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fat
both in
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healthy
diet and average diet is 20, and it is 15% in
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healthy
diet for sport.

In summary, the
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carbohydrates
, protein and
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fat
is roughly similar in these three diets.

IELTS academic The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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