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The maps below ahow ashford in 2010 and Ashford now

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The map shows the Ashford in 2010 and changes in city that happened until now. Firstly, residential area have become more wider with new accommodations for residents. Also, four high-rise buildings were built near with river. Moreover, green zone became bigger with new trees and pond in the down side of the road to city. Secondly, transport infrastructure has been developed, so it is to get to the city now with new bridge for ground transport instead of ferry for several people that was before. Plus, road was constructed to new yacht marina complex so people can use boats and yachts as transport now. Finally, Ashford have become more open to new inhabitants and people have more variety of transport means now.
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the Ashford in 2010 and
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changes
in city that happened until
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now
.

Firstly
, residential area have become
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more wider
with
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new
accommodations for residents.
Also
, four high-rise buildings
were built
near with river.
Moreover
, green zone became bigger with
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new
trees and pond in the
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down side
of the road to city.

Secondly
,
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transport
infrastructure has
been developed
,
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so
it is to
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get
to the city
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now
with
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new
bridge for ground
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transport
instead
of ferry for several
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people
that was
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before
. Plus, road
was constructed
to
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new
yacht marina complex
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so
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people
can
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use
boats and yachts as
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transport
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now
.

Finally
, Ashford have become more open to
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new
inhabitants and
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people
have more variety of
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transport
means
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now
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IELTS academic The maps below ahow ashford in 2010 and Ashford now

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  American English
4 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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