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The chart shows sales of million bottles of milk and honey in Uzbekistan in 2005

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A glance at the bar chart provided reveals data for how many bottles of milk and honey were purchased by the residents of Uzbekistan over the decade. One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the sale of milk gradually increased and remained steady for the last two years. Also note worthy is the fact that the interest of Uzbek people towards honey was smaller than milk except for 1998.
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals data for how
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many
bottles of milk and honey were
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purchased
by the residents of Uzbekistan over the decade.

One
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particularly interesting
fact highlighted by the figure is that the sale of milk
gradually
increased and remained steady for the last two years.
Also
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note worthy
is the fact that the interest of Uzbek
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people
towards honey was smaller than milk
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except for
1998.
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IELTS academic The chart shows sales of million bottles of milk and honey in Uzbekistan in 2005

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