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The pie charts depict the nformation about the consumption of electricity from people of eastern Europe who lived in various factors between 2007 and 2010. The data given in percentage

The pie charts depict the nformation about the consumption of electricity from people of eastern Europe who lived in various factors between 2007 and 2010. The data given in percentage Xq7mr

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