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Hydroelectricity power plant

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This diagram below represents, the pictorial presentation of hydroelectric power station. It shows how electricity generates. The river flows from the high level reservoir to lower level. It intakes depend upon the time period whether it is a day or night. During the day, dam warrior allows water to meet the power station in which their is a generator. From where electricity generates and provides to power lines through which it supply start to national grid. Whilst in the night time, it functioning works autonomous. From the down stream it goes to reversible turbine. It pumps water into the same passage and meets the river. This process continues during the generation of electricity
This diagram below represents, the pictorial presentation of hydroelectric power station. It
shows
how electricity generates. The river flows from the high level reservoir to lower level.
It intakes
depend upon the time period whether it is a day or night. During the day, dam warrior
allows
water to
meet
the power station in which
their
is a generator. From where electricity generates and provides to power lines through which it supply
start
to national grid. Whilst in the
night time
,
it functioning
works autonomous. From the down stream it goes to reversible turbine. It pumps water into the same passage and meets the river. This process continues during the generation of
electricity
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IELTS academic Hydroelectricity power plant

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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