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The pie charts compares a survey between the most common advantages and disadvantages of tourists of Bowen Island.

The pie charts compares a survey between the most common advantages and disadvantages of tourists of Bowen Island. Overall, The most common disadvantages chart is divided into four main toppics such as weather, high cost living, entertainment and food quality. Other chart is the most common advantages which provides informations about the people, the secenery, the good accommodation and culture. The most common disadvantage, High cost of living is the lagest part, a half of all toppic. Entertainment, weather and Food quality are the small part of all that are 25, 15 and 10%, respectively. The most commom advantage has the two laght toppics that are the people at 42% and the scenery at 35%.
The pie charts compares a survey between the most
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advantages and disadvantages of tourists of Bowen Island.

Overall
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disadvantages chart
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toppics
such as weather, high cost living, entertainment and food quality. Other chart is the most
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advantages which provides
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about the
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people
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secenery
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accommodation and culture.

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disadvantage, High cost of living is the
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part, a half of all
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toppic
. Entertainment, weather and Food quality are the
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part of all that are 25, 15 and 10%,
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at 42% and the scenery at 35%.
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IELTS academic The pie charts compares a survey between the most common advantages and disadvantages of tourists of Bowen Island.

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4 paragraphs
115 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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