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The maps display information about the layout of Islip Town Centre in Today’s and in the future plans of development layout.

The maps display information about the layout of Islip Town Centre in Today’s and in the future plans of development layout. 2apw6
The maps display information about the layout of Islip Town Centre in Today’s and in the future plans of development layout. Generally, in the future landscape, there is an additional facilities such as huge shopping mall, bus station, and pedestrians road, all of these are connected to a ring road surrounding the city. Following this, in today’s layout the Main road as a primary road that connecting to the west of city to the east. A long side of the Main road, there are several shops. In addition, behind shops in Main road, there is a residential area. The road is not connected to the school and the park. Hence, people need to take a Main road, go to the west and turn left, the school at the south west of the Main road. The park at the south east of the main road just turn right at the Main road. On the contrary, in the future plans development, there are altering significantly in the Main road, it become a ring road that connects all areas and surrounding the town. Some transformation that clearly happen in the future plans, firstly the Main road in previous maps are stood, it will transform to a Pedestrian area. All the long side of Pedestrian area there are a bus station at the north corner, huge shopping centre in between of car park and bus station. At the next side of car park, there is a new residential that interconnected to a ring road. On the south side of Pedestrian area there are several shops and behind that shops there are a residential area. Lastly, The park and school location are same like in the previous maps. But in future plans, all of these facilities are connecting easily by a ring road.
The maps display information about the layout of
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Islip
Town
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Centre
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Today
’s and in the
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future
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plans
of development layout.

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, in the
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landscape, there is an additional
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facilities
such as huge shopping mall, bus station, and
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pedestrians
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road
, all of these
are connected
to a
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ring
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road
surrounding the city.

Following this, in
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today
’s layout the
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Main
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road
as a primary
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road
that connecting to the west of city to the east. A long side of the
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Main
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road
, there are several
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shops
.
In addition
, behind
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shops
in
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Main
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road
, there is a residential
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area
. The
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road
is not connected to the school and the
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park
.
Hence
,
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people
need to take a
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Main
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road
, go to the west and turn
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left
, the school at the
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south west
of the
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Main
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road
. The
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park
at the
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south east
of the
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main
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road
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just
turn right at the
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Main
road.

On the contrary
, in the
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future
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plans
development, there are altering
significantly
in the
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Main
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road
, it
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become
a
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ring
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road
that connects all
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areas
and surrounding the town.
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transformation that
clearly
happen in the
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,
firstly
the
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Main
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road
in previous maps
are stood
, it will transform to a
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Pedestrian
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area
. All the long side of
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area
there are a bus station at the north corner, huge shopping
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centre
in between of car
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park
and bus station. At the
next
side of car
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park
, there is a new residential that interconnected to a
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ring
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road
. On the south side of
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Pedestrian
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area
there are several
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shops
and behind that
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shops
there are a residential
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area
.
Lastly
, The
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park
and school location are same like in the previous maps.
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in
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plans
, all of these facilities are connecting
easily
by a
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ring
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road
.
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