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The line graph demonstrates the proportion of users of the internet with percentage in 3 Europan 3 countries, including USA, Canada and Mexico over the span of 10 years starting from 1999. In total, It can be seen clearly in the given graph that the quantity of the internet usage in these countries raised than in the past over the period. The usage of the internet increased to 100% from 10% in Canada between 1999 and 2009. In the USA the proportion of users was haighst with 20% in 1999. Hovewer, the USA witnessed less increase than Canada with 80% by 2009. The lowest figure was in Mexico. The population of the internet contained 5% in 1999. In contrast to others, this amount increased to only 40% after 10 years. increased to only 40% after 10 years.
The line graph demonstrates the proportion of users of the internet with percentage in 3
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3 countries,
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, Canada and Mexico over the span of 10 years starting from 1999.

In total, It can be
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clearly
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graph that the quantity of the internet usage in these countries
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raised
than in the past over the period.

The usage of the internet increased to 100% from 10% in Canada between 1999 and 2009. In the USA the proportion of users was
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haighst
with 20% in 1999.
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Hovewer
, the USA witnessed less increase than Canada with 80% by 2009.

The lowest figure was in Mexico. The population of the internet contained 5% in 1999.
In contrast
to others, this amount increased to
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only
40% after 10 years.
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increased
to
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40% after 10 years.
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