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Employees were born in the European union but they work in the US.

Employees were born in the European union but they work in the US. MyDVk

The bat chart illustrates about the employees were born in various the European countries which are the French, the Italian, the German and the British on the contrary they work in the America in 1999. Overall, tje highest number of employees were went in the US from the British but the French folks were supremely down compare with the German crowds. Firstly, around 5000 the French employees were came in the US for employment in 1999. The German workers were more than the Italian labour in the United States, 25000 and approximately 75000 workers respectively. 2000 workers were came from other European nations. Other countries' employees ratio was lower than the German and the British. Furthermore, the British manpower were came in the US work in science & technology firm, their amount was more than other countries, they was around 27000. The German workers were less than the British, 25000, and 27000 workforce respectively.

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