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Number of employees born from the European countries but they work in the US.

Number of employees born from the European countries but they work in the US. Xl89r

The bat chart illustrates about the employees were born in various the European countries which are the French, the Italian, the German and the British on the contrary they work in the America in 1999. Overall, tje highest number of employees were went in the US from the British but the French folks were supremely down compare with the German crowds. Firstly, around 5000 the French employees were went in the US for employment in 1999. The German workers were more than the Italian labour in the United States, 25000 and approximately 75000 workers respectively. 2000 workers were went from other European nations. Furthermore, the British manpower were went in the US work in science & technology firm, their amount was more than other countries, they was around 27000. The German workers were less than the British, 25000, and 27000 workforce respectively.

The bat chart illustrates about the employees were born
 in various the European countries which are the French, the Italian, the German and the British on the contrary
 they work in the America in 1999.

Overall
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A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".the highest
highest
 number of employees were Consider using a past participle here: "gone".gone
went
 in the US from the British This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the French folks were supremely
 down compare with the German crowds.

Firstly
, around 5000 the French employees were Consider using a past participle here: "gone".gone
went
 in the US for employment in 1999. The German You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemployeetraderpeasantlaborer
workers
 were more than the Italian Possible spelling mistake. 'labour' is British English.labor
labour
 in the United States, 25000 and approximately 75000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemployeetraderpeasantlaborer
workers
respectively
. 2000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemployeetraderpeasantlaborer
workers
 were Consider using a past participle here: "gone".gone
went
 from other European nations.

Furthermore
, the British manpower were Consider using a past participle here: "gone".gone
went
 in the US work in science & technology firm, their amount was more than other countries, they Use third-person plural verb with 'they': "are", "were".arewere
was
 around 27000. The German You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemployeetraderpeasantlaborer
workers
 were less than the British, 25000, and 27000 workforce respectively
. 