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The pie charts compare the proportion of British students capable to speak languages other than English in 2000 and 2010

The pie charts compare the proportion of British students capable to speak languages other than English in 2000 and 2010 AP5Ox
The pie charts compare the proportion of British students capable to speak languages other than English in 2000 and 2010. It is noticeable that both years, the ratio of Spanish was the most spoken language from British studens, whilst the least spoken was the German language. Additionally, there were some differences regarding the other languages. There was less than a third in the figure for Spanish, at 30% in 2000, being at 5% lower than its data in 2010. Meanwhile, the percentage of Germany in 2000 was the same as its statistic in 2010, at one in ten of pie, However, the proportion of British students were not speaking any language witnessed a decrease from 2000 to 2010 in the range of 20% and 10%. Notably, the ratio of Another language and Two other language in 2000 were 15% and 10%, compared to their statistic in 2010 witnessed an increase 5%, when the proportion of French declined gently, ranging from 15% to 10%.
The pie charts compare the proportion of British students capable to speak
languages
other than English in 2000 and 2010. It is noticeable that both years, the ratio of Spanish was the most spoken
language
from British
studens
, whilst the least spoken was the German
language
.
Additionally
, there were
some
differences regarding the other languages.

There was less than a third in the figure for Spanish, at 30% in 2000, being at 5% lower than its data in 2010. Meanwhile, the percentage of Germany in 2000 was the same as its statistic in 2010, at one in ten of pie,
However
, the proportion of British students were not speaking any
language
witnessed a decrease from 2000 to 2010 in the range of 20% and 10%.

Notably
, the ratio of Another
language
and Two other
language
in 2000 were 15% and 10%, compared to their statistic in 2010 witnessed an increase 5%, when the proportion of French declined
gently
, ranging from 15% to 10%.
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