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The pie charts compare the production and consumption of coffee by different regions. They also present information on how the profit is distributed under various segments.

The pie charts compare the production and consumption of coffee by different regions. They also present information on how the profit is distributed under various segments. 0MAV3

The pie charts compare the production and consumption of coffee by different regions. They also present information on how the profit is distributed under various segments. Overall, it is evident that the majority of coffee intake is in Europe, followed by America, while South Africa happens to be the largest producer of coffee in the world. It is clear that the biggest share of the profit is accounted by the producers and the least goes to the exporters.

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IELTS academic The pie charts compare the production and consumption of coffee by different regions. They also present information on how the profit is distributed under various segments.

Academic

American English

2 paragraphs

78 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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