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Some people believe that it is cruel to test drugs and other new products on animals. Others believe that this sort of testing is important and necessary for improving and even saving people's lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that it is cruel to test drugs and other new products on animals. Others believe that this sort of testing is important and necessary for improving and even saving people's lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion JKonw

Experimenting of human-related substances on animals before than using them by humans to develop and save their lives is unfair. While there are a plenty of beneficial reasons to examine any products to approve that they are safe to use, from my point of view, the unfair way of human testing should be changed by other possible ways. In this essay we are going to talk about the new ways of testing which are animal-free and investigating the level of risk of doing such tests on wildlife. New technologies helped us to find out effective ways of testing risky products. A group of scientists proved that some high-tech simulators can calculate the risk of any materials in unrealistic environments such as computers, virtual reality labs and so on. Also, robots are configured to analyze new materials and acting like humans by digitalization and using internet of things. Changing the ecosystems by experiment of new drugs could be threat animals' lives. Therefore, if any species endangered by laboratory tests such as changing behavior, it will be out of control. Animal testing is not only the cheapest way to test drugs, but also the most reliable one. The drawbacks of doing such experiments are absolutely put them in the danger.

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