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The chart below describes the proportion of building pay change in Dubai during the period from 2008 to 2015.

The chart below describes the proportion of building pay change in Dubai during the period from 2008 to 2015. R5NYY
The chart below describes the proportion of building pay change in Dubai during the period from 2008 to 2015. Overall, it can be seen that the fluctuation in the building price during the period which was at a peak in the start of the period In 2008, the percentage was merely over 40% which reached a peak of the period. On the other hand, in 2009, there was a dramatic decrease with more than 80% reduction in apartment fee which was about -42% and was the least percentage over the course. However, there was a substantial increase to about 2% in 2010. Then, house costs diminished slightly to approximately 1% in 2012. From 2012 to 2013, apartment prices rose slightly from just over 0% to approximately 3%. In 2014, house prices remained stable in which there was also about 3%. On the other hand, there was a tiny decrease to just under 0% in 2015.
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the proportion of building pay
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change
in Dubai during the period from 2008 to 2015.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the fluctuation in the building price during the period which was at a peak in the
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start
of the period

In 2008, the percentage was
merely
over 40% which reached a peak of the period.
On the other hand
, in 2009, there was a dramatic decrease with more than 80% reduction in apartment fee which was about -42% and was the least percentage over the course.
However
, there was a substantial increase to about 2% in 2010. Then,
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house
costs diminished
slightly
to approximately 1% in 2012.

From 2012 to 2013, apartment prices rose
slightly
from
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just
over 0% to approximately 3%. In 2014,
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house
prices remained stable in which there was
also
about 3%.
On the other hand
, there was a tiny decrease to
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just
under 0% in 2015.
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