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The pie charts compare the four different ways that people in Canada and Australia used to access the news.

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The pie charts compare the four different ways that people in Canada and Australia used to access the news. Overall, TV was the most popular media that Canadians used for reading the news, whereas people in Australia got the news mainly by using online methods. In addition, accessing news in unspecified ways was unusual in both countries. Specifically, the percentage of getting news by TV was highest in Canada at 40% while the figure for that in Australia was slightly lower by 3%. Similarly, the rate of people in Canada accessing the news on the radio accounted for 7%, which was 5% higher than that in Australia. Considerably, 14% of Canadians used print to approach the news that was double the proportion of getting the news by print for Australians. In contrast, Australians mostly access the news through online media that accounted for more than a half at 52%, leaving the figure for the same way at 36% in Canada. Meanwhile, Canadians and Australians accessed the news in other ways that made up the least proportions at 3% and 2% consecutively.
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by TV was highest in Canada at 40% while the figure for that in Australia was
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on the radio accounted for 7%, which was 5% higher than that in Australia.
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print to approach the
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that was double the proportion of getting the
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by print for Australians.

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through online media that accounted for more than a half at 52%, leaving the figure for the same
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at 36% in Canada. Meanwhile, Canadians and Australians accessed the
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that made up the least proportions at 3% and 2%
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IELTS academic The pie charts compare the four different ways that people in Canada and Australia used to access the news.

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