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The bar chart and graph below give information on the most populous nations on Earth and the amount of carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions by country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart and graph below give information on the most populous nations on Earth and the amount of carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions by country. QKNo9
The bar chart and graph depict the world's most populated countries as well as the quantity of carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions emitted by each. Overall, China was not only the most populous country, but it also produced the largest amount of CO2 waste. It was clear that there were substantial distinctions in terms of the population between China, India and others. China was at the top with 18. 70%, higher than the second-placed 0. 82%  and about 21 times more than Thailand, which ranked last. Concurrently, the remaining nations contributed only a little proportion of the total, accounting for 4. 39%, 3. 54%, 2. 79%, 2. 69%, and so on. Moving to the pie chart, China maintained the lead position, accounting for 30% of all CO2 emissions. Meanwhile, the United States produced 15% of the total, which was only about half that of China's. Countries such as Canada, Germany, the United Kingdom, and others represented for barely 1% or 2% of global carbon dioxide.
The bar chart and graph depict the world's most populated countries
as well
as the quantity of carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions emitted by each.
Overall
, China was not
only
the most populous country,
but
it
also
produced the largest amount of CO2 waste.

It was
clear
that there were substantial distinctions in terms of the population between China, India
and others
. China was at the top with 18. 70%, higher than the second-placed 0. 82%
 
and about 21 times more than Thailand, which ranked last.
Concurrently
, the remaining nations contributed
only
a
little
proportion of the total, accounting for 4. 39%, 3. 54%, 2. 79%, 2. 69%, and
so
on.

Moving to the pie chart, China maintained the lead position, accounting for 30% of all CO2 emissions. Meanwhile, the United States produced 15% of the total, which was
only
about half that of China's. Countries such as Canada, Germany, the United Kingdom,
and others
represented for
barely
1% or 2% of global carbon dioxide.
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IELTS academic The bar chart and graph below give information on the most populous nations on Earth and the amount of carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions by country.

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