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Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown in the diagram below. The diagram shows the clothing imports of Australia from various regions

Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown in the diagram below. The diagram shows the clothing imports of Australia from various regions L3mp6
The bar chart illustrates the expenses of importing clothes from three nations, by the Australians in the year 2000. The data is calibrated in Million Dollars. Overall, expense of importing clothes from Asia was at the peak across the quarters, except the third quarter. Besides, importing expense from the USA was found to be the least, for all the quarters. To begin with, the money spent on importing clothes from Asia was the highest of all with just below 80 million dollars in the first quarter. After that, the expense remained stable at around 75 million dollars for the remaining quarters and also remained the highest for except the third quarter. Expenditure on importing clothes from Europe, start at just below 50 million dollars in the first quarter and notched up to below 70 million dollars in the third quarter. Then in final quarter, it dropped and returned to the expense as same as the first quarter. In case of importing costs from the USA, it remained as the minimum with 45 million dollars for all the quarters except the second quarter, which a had increased figures of around 48 million dollars.
The bar chart illustrates the expenses of
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importing
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clothes
from three nations, by the Australians in the year 2000. The data
is calibrated
in
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Million
Dollars.

Overall
,
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expense
of
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importing
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clothes
from Asia was at the peak across the
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quarters
, except the third
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quarter
.
Besides
,
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importing
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expense
from the USA
was found
to be the least, for all the quarters.

To
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begin
with, the money spent on
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importing
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clothes
from Asia was the highest of all with
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just
below 80
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million
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dollars
in the
first
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quarter
. After that, the
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expense
remained stable at around 75
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million
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dollars
for the remaining
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quarters
and
also
remained the highest for except the third quarter.

Expenditure on
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importing
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clothes
from Europe,
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start
at
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just
below 50
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million
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dollars
in the
first
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quarter
and notched up to below 70
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million
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dollars
in the third
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quarter
. Then in final
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quarter
, it dropped and returned to the
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expense
as same as the
first
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quarter
. In case of
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importing
costs from the USA, it remained as the minimum with 45
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million
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dollars
for all the
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quarters
except the second
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quarter
, which a had increased figures of around 48
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million
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dollars
.
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IELTS academic Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown in the diagram below. The diagram shows the clothing imports of Australia from various regions

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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