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The pie charts compare the average expenditures of a school in the UK between three different years : 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The pie charts compare the average expenditures of a school in the UK between three different years: 1981, 1991 and 2001. ldQwQ
The pie charts compare the average expenditures of a school in the UK between three different years: 1981, 1991 and 2001. It can be seen that this UK school spent the most money for teachers’ salaries while the outcome for insurance took up the smallest proportion in total school spending over three times shown. Looking at the details, almost half of the UK school expenditures were used for paying Teachers’ salaries. Furthermore, the percentage of this category reached the peak at exactly 50% in 1991. On the contrary, the figure for Insurance was less than one tenth as much as that of Teachers’ salaries during 20 years shown and got the largest at 8% in 2001. Regarding the remaining categories, other workers witnessed a minimal reduction from 1981 to 1991, by 6% and also, kept the second position in receiving money from the UK school, right after Teachers’ salaries category. The opposite trend was true for Resources (e. g books), the figure for this aspect increased from 15% to 20% over the first 10-year period. However, both of these categories experienced a gradual decrease to around 10% in the last period shown. Also in this time, a quarter of the school income was paid for Furniture and equipment, the percentage of this rose to the second position surpassing other aspects while it was just 5% in 1991.
The pie charts compare the average expenditures of a
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in the UK between three
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years: 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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that this UK
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school
spent the most money for
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teachers’
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salaries
while the outcome for insurance took up the smallest proportion in total
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school
spending over three times shown.

Looking at the
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, almost half of the UK
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school
expenditures were
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used
for paying
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Teachers’
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salaries
.
Furthermore
, the percentage of this
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category
reached the peak at exactly 50% in 1991.
On the contrary
, the figure for Insurance was less than one tenth as much as that of
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Teachers’
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salaries
during 20 years shown and
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got
the largest at 8% in 2001.

Regarding the remaining
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, other workers witnessed a minimal reduction from 1981 to 1991, by 6% and
also
,
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kept
the second position in receiving money from the UK
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school
, right after
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Teachers’
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salaries
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category
. The opposite trend was true for Resources (e. g books), the figure for this aspect increased from 15% to 20% over the
first
10-year period.
However
, both of these
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categories
experienced a gradual decrease to around 10% in the last period shown.
Also
in this time, a quarter of the
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school
income
was paid
for Furniture and equipment, the percentage of this rose to the second position surpassing other aspects while it was
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just
5% in 1991.
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IELTS academic The pie charts compare the average expenditures of a school in the UK between three different years: 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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