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The map below show a cafe 10 years ago 5 year ago and now

The map below show a cafe 10 years ago 5 year ago and now R5BNV
The three pictures compare the layout of a cafe as it was in order cats and 5 year before with a current site design. It is Lucid from the maps that, the predominant changed for a present Caffe involves the addition of a new tables in the terracewhich shows trend. Predominantly, in ten years ago the tables were situated in the middle of a cafe in round shape and the entrence is located in the west of a cafe between Terrace. In the North East corner, the food preparation Centre was situated. However, toilets were opposite in the North East side for the more before 5 your, a cafe remained unchanged for almost 5 years expected only tables were added in both terraces which shape is rectangular. Moving further, present map manifest little changes in a cafe the rectangular tables were added in both their areas is in North and South side in the east corner. Beside that, middle tables shape was changed and counter was added in South Corner between cash desk and toilets.
The three pictures compare the layout of a
cafe
as it was in order cats and 5 year
before
with a
current
site design. It is Lucid from the maps that, the predominant
changed
for a present
Caffe
involves the addition of a new
tables
in the
terracewhich
shows
trend.
Predominantly
, in ten years ago the
tables
were situated
in the middle of a
cafe
in round shape and the
entrence
is located
in the west of a
cafe
between Terrace. In the North East corner, the food preparation
Centre
was situated
.
However
, toilets were opposite in the North East side for the more
before
5 your, a
cafe
remained unchanged for almost 5 years
expected
only
tables
were
added
in both terraces which shape is rectangular. Moving
further
, present map manifest
little
changes
in a
cafe
the rectangular
tables
were
added
in both their areas is in North and South side in the east corner. Beside that, middle
tables
shape was
changed
and counter was
added
in South Corner between cash desk and toilets.
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IELTS academic The map below show a cafe 10 years ago 5 year ago and now

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