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illustrate goods transportation amount between 1974 to 2002 in the UK.

illustrate goods transportation amount between 1974 to 2002 in the UK. 6lDGr
The graph below illustrate goods transportation amount between 1974 to 2002 in the UK. Overall, road transporting the largest amount of goods in UK through 1974 to 2002. In addition, while using water with transportation having the second highest output and the throughout period of transport with pipeline having the minimum amount of transported. With regards to transporting goods through road. In 1974 the million tones of goods output around 70 million tones it is being the peak amount of output way in contrast to other method. Then the quantity of goods output in the UK by road was kept fluctuated between 1978 to 1995. However, in the late 1995 to 1998 it start to see a considerable growth in road transport, and keep slightly increased in 1998 to 2002 and finally had 98 million tones of transport also the method of highest amount. While the lowest quantity of transportation in UK with pipeline, it had around 3 million tones of transportation amount which is the lowest quantity in contrast with other method. The amount of using steadily rose since 1974 and finally earn 21 million tones at 2002. On the other hand, tranport by water is the second highest amount of goods being transport in the UK. Even though the quantity transported by rail exact 40 million tones is higher than the beginning of water which is 38 million tones. However, in 1978 the amount of using water start getting considerable growth and keep steady from 1982 to 1992. While in 1993 it start to drop slightly from around 58 million tones to around 46 million tones, It start being increase again from 1998 to 2002 and finally having around 63 million tones which is the second highest transported amount in UK.
The graph below illustrate
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goods
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transportation
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amount
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1974 and 2002".
between 1974 to 2002
in the UK.

Overall
,
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road
transporting the largest
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amount
of
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goods
in UK through 1974 to 2002.
In addition
, while using
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water
with
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transportation
having the second highest
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output
and the throughout period of
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transport
with pipeline having the minimum
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amount
of transported.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
transporting
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goods
through
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road
. In 1974 the
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million
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tones
of
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goods
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output
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around
70
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million
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tones
it is being the peak
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amount
of
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output
way
in contrast
to other method. Then the
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quantity
of
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goods
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output
in the UK by
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road
was
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kept
fluctuated
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between 1978 to 1995
.
However
, in the late 1995 to 1998 it
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start
to
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see
a considerable growth in
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road
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transport
, and
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keep
slightly
increased in 1998 to 2002 and
finally
had 98
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million
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tones
of
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transport
also
the method of
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highest
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amount
. While the lowest
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quantity
of
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transportation
in UK with pipeline, it had
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around
3
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million
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tones
of
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transportation
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amount
which is the lowest
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quantity
in contrast
with other method. The
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amount
of using
steadily
rose since 1974 and
finally
earn 21
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million
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tones
at 2002.

On the other hand
,
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tranport
by
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water
is the second highest
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amount
of
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goods
being
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transport
in the UK.
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Even though
the
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quantity
transported by rail exact 40
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million
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tones
is higher than the beginning of
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water
which is 38
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million
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tones
.
However
, in 1978 the
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amount
of using
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water
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start
getting considerable growth and
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keep
steady from 1982 to 1992. While in 1993 it
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start
to drop
slightly
from
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around
58
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million
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tones
to
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around
46
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million
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, It
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start
being increase again from 1998 to 2002 and
finally
having
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around
63
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million
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tones
which is the second highest transported
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amount
in UK.
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