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Reasons Why Agricultural Land Becomes Less Productive.

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The pie chart gives information about the causes of worldwide land degradation and the table shows data of percentage of land degraded due to these causes in North America, Europe and Oceania in 1990. Overall, the major cause of land degradation was overgrazing and the highest percentage of land was deteriorated in Europe. Overgrazing destroyed the highest amount of worldwide land. Deforestation and over cultivation had a marginal difference of just 2 percent, at 30 and 28 respectively. A very less portion of land was deteriorated due to other reasons. A total of 23 percent of land was degraded in Europe, the major cause of which was deforestation, followed by over cultivation which deteriorated 7. 7 percent of the land. Over grazing destroyed the least percentage of land. 13 percent of Oceania’s land was degraded, the most prominent reason being which destroyed 11. 3 percent of the land. Deforestation caused a very low percentage of damage, whereas did no loss. North America had the least amount of land degradation, merely 5 percent, out of which 1. 5 percent was caused due to and its double percentage of land was destroyed due to. Deforestation had the lowest percentage of 0. 2 percent.
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