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The given picture illustrates the process of manufacturing clothes using recycled plastic bottles.

The given picture illustrates the process of manufacturing clothes using recycled plastic bottles. MBQn9
The diagram illustrates the process by which plastic bottles are recycle. In general, a closer look at the picture highlights the fact that the process of recycling plastic bottles involves eight separate stages, commencing with collecting old plastic bottles and finishing with clothing is produce. Looking in the figure in the more detail, in the initial stage, the bottles is collected after being transported to factories. In the factories, the old bottles is then sorted before cutting into tiny pieces. Subsequently, the pieces flastic is washed by machine and dried under the sun without 10 hours and prepared for the following stages. In the next step, those pieces is melted down by a boiler. The liquid is then strained and made into yarn. After which, the yarn is weaved by weave machine become fabric rolls. The entire plastic bottles recycling process concludes after the clothing are sewn from the fabric rolls and then deliveried to customers for sales.
The diagram illustrates the process by which
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plastic
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are recycle.

In general
, a closer look at the picture highlights the fact that the process of recycling
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plastic
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bottles
involves eight separate stages, commencing with collecting
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old
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plastic
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bottles
and finishing with clothing is produce.

Looking in the figure in the more detail, in the initial stage, the
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bottles
is collected
after
being transported
to factories. In the factories, the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
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bottles
is then sorted
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before
cutting into tiny pieces.
Subsequently
, the pieces
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flastic
is washed
by machine and dried under the sun without 10 hours and prepared for the following stages.

In the
next
step, those pieces
is melted
down by a boiler. The liquid is then strained and made into yarn. After which, the yarn is
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weaved
by weave machine become fabric rolls. The entire
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plastic
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bottles
recycling process concludes after the clothing
are sewn
from the fabric rolls and then
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deliveried
to customers for sales.
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IELTS academic The given picture illustrates the process of manufacturing clothes using recycled plastic bottles.

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