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The pie charts compare the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries over two separate years.

The pie charts compare the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries over two separate years. XyrEY
The pie charts compare the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries over two separate years. Total electricity production increased dramatically from 1980 to 2000 in both Australia and France. While the totals for both countries were similar, there were big differences in the fuel sources used. Coal was used to produce 50 of the total 100 units of electricity in Australia in 1980, rising to 130 out of 170 units in 2000. By contrast, nuclear power became the most important fuel source in France in 2000, producing almost 75% of the country’s electricity. Australia depended on hydropower for just under 25% of its electricity in both years, but the amount of electricity produced using this type of power fell from 5 to only 2 units in France. Oil, on the other hand, remained a relatively important fuel source in France, but its use declined in Australia. Both countries relied on natural gas for electricity production significantly more in 1980 than in 2000.
The pie charts compare the amount of
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electricity
produced using five
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sources
of
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fuel
in two
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countries
over two separate years.

Total
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electricity
production increased
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from 1980 to 2000 in both Australia and France. While the totals for both
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countries
were similar, there were
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big
differences in the
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fuel
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sources
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used
.

Coal was
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used
to produce 50 of the total 100 units of
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electricity
in Australia in 1980, rising to 130 out of 170 units in 2000. By contrast, nuclear power became the most
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important
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fuel
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source
in France in 2000, producing almost 75% of the
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country’s
electricity.

Australia depended on hydropower for
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under 25% of its
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electricity
in both years,
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the amount of
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electricity
produced using this type of power fell from 5 to
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only
2 units in France. Oil,
on the other hand
, remained a
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important
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fuel
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source
in France,
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its
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use
declined in Australia. Both
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countries
relied on natural gas for
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electricity
production
significantly
more in 1980 than in 2000.
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IELTS academic The pie charts compare the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries over two separate years.

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